Tuesday, 23 February 2010

Missy's summary and feedback

SUMMARY:
INFORMATION FROM THE WWF PROTECTS
WWF has worked toward the protection of endangered species since 1961.It's mission is to find solutions to save the andangered animals and plants.They have successfully saved a lot of animals back from the brink of extinction.It has helped to not only conserve rich and varied ecoysystems but also delivered real benefits to local people through new livehood opporturities and sustainable development.Destructive human activities have led to the current rate of species extinction,which is at last 100-1,000 times higher than the expected natural rate.
HOW TO PROTECT ANIMALS
Find out what animals living near you are listed or the endangered species list.Spend some time learning about the animals and what their preferred habitat is.Contribute to nature reserves and other winderness areas.Habitat preservation is one of the best ways to help protect endangered animals.Buy erviromentally friendly goods.Creat or restore habitat for endangered animals.Join a local,national or global conservation organization.
Reference:
http://www.worldwildlife.org
http://www.ehow.com

FEEDBACK
Obviously,the research and data have told us that a large number of species are facing extinction.Biological diversity has never been so threatened as it is today as a result of the process of human civilization.The various forms of presure created by human activity have destroyed natural balance,led to the deterioration of natural habitats,genetic erosion and the varity,even disapperance,of a number of plant and animal specis.
Our diet cannot be without meat.There are living stocks,which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce,Therefore,we need not to resort to wild animals,especially the endangered ones.To protect animals is to protect our living enviroment.Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.

1 comment:

  1. Plagiarised.

    And not academic.

    And teh 'feedback' is not a response to a clear thesis stated in your summary.

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