Monday, 8 February 2010

August' Essay Plan

TITLE: Further strengthen financial supervision is not conducive to economic development

ESSAY ABSTRACT AND KEY WORDS:
1 Obama' state of the union address speech
2 bank resure
3 law of the economy
4 financial supervision
5 against the law of economy
6........

PREAMBLE:
Obama said he will to limit the big banks on the business and to present them involves in investment business in his speech .Some business and political leaders think that Obama' consistent with this formulation is not practical and would limit the law of the economy itself.

MAIN TEXT:
1 Paragraph :Obama in the state of the union stressed that the united states should continue to strengthen financial supervision and implementation of "a serious financial reform" ,to present the crisis happen again,however, the global financial crisis is not just caused of the adverse financial regulation,on the contray,excessive financial regulation is not conducive to economy laws and impede economic development

2 Paragraph:(my point of view) should not strengthen financial supervision , it against the law of the economy.

3 Paragraph: example(reference)

4paragraph: example(reference)



CONCLUSION: further strengthen the U.S. financial regulation is bad for itself and world

REFERENCE: Obama' State Of The Union Address Jan 27.2010

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1 comment:

  1. bank resure - ?

    'Obama said he will to limit the big banks on the business and to present them involves in investment business in his speech' - too many grammar problems

    Good ideas, needs more structure and evidence of research.

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