Kamran's Essay Summary and Responce

Summary:
In this report article first of all writer gives definition about social networking services which tells us that it is a service which allows us to exchange our ideas, views and can be used for educational purposes. After that it also gives information about different social networking services which can be easily used on computer as well as on mobile phones now a day. It also state two main types of social networks and relationship between young people and social networking services. In addition, article also evaluates this service in brief. Moreover, it also defines the benefits among young people as well as opportunities for education. It also report barrier and risks such as identity theft, hacking account and maybe bullied by someone in terms of making new friends. Lastly, article gives some ideas and some examples of different online networking sites.

Response:
As you know my essay is all about online social networking; another miracle of internet technology, so i think this report article contain many useful things those related to my topic like definition, different social networking services, types, benefits and opportunities along with the information about barrier and risks and ideas with example. This all information is described in a well manner and i hope it will help me out to write a good essay on Online Social Networking.

Reference:
http://www.digizen.org/socialnetworking/

Summary and Feedback

Here's the summary of "Putting NASA’s budget in perspective"(Jeff BrooksMonday, July 2, 2007)
Most people think it's important to solve basic life problem rather than going into the space.But there's a very interesting found:For every $1 the government spends on NASA, at the same time $98 on social needs. In other words, if we reduce the funding on social programs by just 1% which is exactly $1, we can get a double NASA’s budget!!That means the government cost a huge amount of money on basic life and spend a very little on Nasa which even does not grow much in recent years.Even the percents of the whole budge goes down . That it achieves so much with such a small share of the federal budget is astonishing.
If the NASA get a high level of support , it can do much better and much more things.
My opnion:
From this article we can konw that the government do spend a lot in basic life and the people should not require the government to remove the outerspace funding to the basic life any more , because it is such a little share of the "budge pie"and can help nothing,and we should agree to encourage the space exporation and give it a higher level of support.It is also very important.The outer space reseach contributes to scientific developments. It will help aerospace ,new energy technologies in our daily life as well, all of which are very useful for humanity;To have a brilliant future. it should be encouraged

Lucas's SummarY and Feedback

Title :Glowing the family business:Special Challenges and Best Practices
SUMMARY :
A large number of family enterprises can not last for a long time. Some famous research illustrates the special challenges to the growth of family business. The article introduces the six important disadvantages of family business: (1) business maturity (2) limited capital (3) ill-suited successors (4) entrepreneurial (5) sibling conflict (6) disparate goals and values.

The first four disadvantages are concluded from enterprise. The owners from different family business have different crisis awareness. The other two disadvantages are the main reason why family business easy to close.

In short, the owner of family business the threats lead to the failure of family business in future.
The most serious threats are disparate goals or values and sibling conflict. The article warn the family business leaders spend money and time on nurture and strengthen family members' conflict, trust and satisfaction.


Feed back:

The article gives the detail about the main reason why family business can not continual for a long time. It analyzes the six main causes and gives the advice to the leaders, what is more ,the essay put the last two disadvantages in to the most important paragraph and stand out it .That is good and useful, I can learn the article’s good structure and good points.However,I think the article does not give us the opposite argument ,maybe it is what I should pay more attention to.


Refference : http://www3.interscience.wiley.com/journal/119157401/abstract?CRETRY=1&SRETRY=0

Missy's summary and feedback

SUMMARY:
INFORMATION FROM THE WWF PROTECTS
WWF has worked toward the protection of endangered species since 1961.It's mission is to find solutions to save the andangered animals and plants.They have successfully saved a lot of animals back from the brink of extinction.It has helped to not only conserve rich and varied ecoysystems but also delivered real benefits to local people through new livehood opporturities and sustainable development.Destructive human activities have led to the current rate of species extinction,which is at last 100-1,000 times higher than the expected natural rate.
HOW TO PROTECT ANIMALS
Find out what animals living near you are listed or the endangered species list.Spend some time learning about the animals and what their preferred habitat is.Contribute to nature reserves and other winderness areas.Habitat preservation is one of the best ways to help protect endangered animals.Buy erviromentally friendly goods.Creat or restore habitat for endangered animals.Join a local,national or global conservation organization.
Reference:
http://www.worldwildlife.org
http://www.ehow.com

FEEDBACK
Obviously,the research and data have told us that a large number of species are facing extinction.Biological diversity has never been so threatened as it is today as a result of the process of human civilization.The various forms of presure created by human activity have destroyed natural balance,led to the deterioration of natural habitats,genetic erosion and the varity,even disapperance,of a number of plant and animal specis.
Our diet cannot be without meat.There are living stocks,which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce,Therefore,we need not to resort to wild animals,especially the endangered ones.To protect animals is to protect our living enviroment.Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.

Renie's summary and response

essay topic :Telecommuting makes work better

Summary: According to the survey conducted by CDW-G, an outstanding information provider technology, about 2/3 interviewed people want to telecommute, and the reasons are:to get rid of commute, to achieve work-life balance,and also to save money, and telecommuting can bring these benefits to people.

The article reveals that telecommuting can help people who work in New York City save 6 years during the track of 40-year working, an ordinary worker in USA wasters about 4 years on working back and forth, and actually four years can be spent on their family, interests, even on work.

It’s also indicate that the most obvious benefit of telecommuting is increased flexibility; it offers e-worker more freedom to handle family things, and an overwhelming percentage of 90% e-workers feel happy with the life that telecommuting provides them.

Moreover, research shows telecommuters are more productive than their office colleagues, and 40% surveyed e-workers said they’re more productive at home. Besides these, one typical e-worker can save $7,000- $17,000 a year.

In short, telecommuting has many advantages, and it can improve workers' life quality and work productivity.

Reference: Kate Lister ,Tom Harnish, Undress for success, the naked truth about making money at home.

Response: the article started with the survey to show how many people want to work from home, then analysis the probable reasons, and the content supports my view of what benefits staff can get from telecommuting from 3 aspects. In the first place, the article talking about what telecommuting brings us is positive, it's in the same position with my essay, and the author gives detailed information to support his opinion, for example, the first reason is people want to get rid of commute, the author interprets it from another angle which is the time wasted on commuter can be spent on other things. In addition, it shows the study figures, I can reference these parts to make the essay more evident and persuasive.Further more, and it has an all-round view which can complement my opinion,for instant, in my view, flexibility just means the e-worker can enjoy flexible working condition and schedules, but in this article, it means the whole family can enjoy, because e-worker can schedule their work according to family, such as, send kids to school, make meals. In conclusion, it broadens my view, and provides useful information which can be used in my essay.

Summary and Response

The Chinese language, its history and current usage

Chinese is generally considered a beautiful and import language, also it is viewed a difficult language. Now more and more people who speak English are learning the Chinese language, and some of them learning very well. However, Written Chinese is more difficult than spoken Chinese, because Chinese character looks like some strange code lumps together.
For all students who want study Chinese, Chinese is Putonghua, the popular and official language in China. Actually in Mainland China there are so many dialects and Putonghua is the most popular language for people from different place to distinguish between their different local accents.
The English speaker who starts to learn Chinese will find that sometimes Chinese is similar to most other languages. Chinese has some words in common with English, or which are written in an alphabetic script. The Chinese learner will discover that nearly all words in Chinese are made up of other simpler words. And lots of words were invented 3,000 years ago.
Nowadays, Chinese has borrowed so many words from other languages and still uses the same meaning. Also there are a certain number of unfamiliar words.

Response:

This book introduces the modern Chinese as it is used in China during the first few years of the 21Th century. And also this book is written for people who are thinking of learning Chinese or who have started learning it already. Also in this book people could find some knowledge about Chinese character culture.
Most foreigner think learning Chinese is a good way to understand China. Also from this book people could find many shortcuts to lean some simple Chinese words or sentences. But the most important reason I chose this book is that, from this book, I got some foreigner’s opinion about Chinese language and Chinese character, and why more and more people learning Chinese.

Reference: The Chinese language: its history and current usage, Daniel Kane, 2006, Tuttle Publishing

Summary and response ---August

ARTICLE TITLE: Principles versus Rules in Financial Supervision--Is There One Superior Apprach?

Summary:
1 The challenging nature of financial supervision:
Firstly,some occupations have changed in some respects.
Secondly,domains of public policy has become complex and no end in this process.
2 Financial Liberalization and Supervision:
Financial liberalization was developing between the second world war and the 1970s.The development of financial libralization was improving so rapidly until the system fall down because of too many wrong assessed risk and leverage.So financial sector operates need big adjustment from its supervisor and create a supervisory frameworks which has more powerful.
Financial supervision and control be produced at that time.
3Principles--based versus rules--based supervision:
Financial corporation get too much greater responsibility after Financial liberalization.So, supervision need to be " governance" supervisor and intervene under the agreed framework.At that background,"principle" is more important than "rule" Some significant changes in the Europear financial and led to a legal formalization of the uk financial system,but the foundation of the financial supervision have never been disappeared and resurfaced to guide the financial system by "principle" rather than rules- based system.And other countrys also more critical and doubt ,towards this british favorite for principles.
Advantages of principle :
1 interference from supervisirs is small 2 a lot of freedom to be creative and innovative strict rules to kill initiative ,creativity and innovation 3 a productive dialogue between supervisor and supervised,better communication between them. 4 financial system are complex ,principle works better than rules.
Advantages of Rule:
1 provide clarity and centanil for financial institation managers 2 provide transparency for bank managers and ensure more fairness.3 more operational than principle 4 the financial system is complex ,that rule can support and explain the broad principle.

Response:
According to this article. I think we should not only build up the principle financial supervision,but also to fusion some rules which is basically and centainly,as author said,the most effective and the best practice financial supervision is a system which have some principle that be supported by a set of prudential rules. However,the financial supervision need more caution to regulate the influence from both of them,as we know, too much rules will lead the market lose its creativity and innovative and it will undercontrol when the environment of financial supervision is too loose as well.How to balance between principle and rule.In my opinion the principle effect the macroeconomy and rules effect the microeconomy .If the financial supervision have correct principles ,the rules of that principle won't drift off the course as well. But i also realized success depend on details .The reason why economic growth year by year in that country probably because of some correct rules which have carried out.so ,my view is should balance the influence of finance between principle and rule.

reference:
Marc Quintyn,principles versus rules in financial supervision - is there one superior apprach, 2009, http://www.qfinance.com/financial-regulation-best-practice

Sources of Renewable Energy - Shantanu

Sources of Renewable Energy by Shantanu

To think about renewable energy we have to think about the sources of renewable energy first. There are various kinds of ways to produce renewable energy in the world. First one is Hydropower. Hydropower means generating electricity, using water. We can use a dam of a river to generate electricity. There will be small way out for the water and water will be stored in behind of the dam. Then water will be released through the narrow way out and on the way it will spin the turbine and that will generate electricity. This is a very old but successful way to generate electricity. By using this way we can generate huge electricity. But the problem of this energy source that the setup is huge and it may create problem for the wildlife in the water. The next is wind power. There will be three blades and the center of them there will be the generator, which will be generating electricity. Wind makes the blade turbine and the generator generates electricity. To get the strongest wind these blades are usually situated above a tall tower or something like that. Using wind power for electricity is very popular because this is totally pollution free. The next is solar power. Solar is manmade plate by which electricity can be generated by using sunlight. This solar energy is expected to get bigger if the technology expands. But now the problem with the solar energy is it is not that much cost efficient and not provide expected electricity. The next one is biomass energy. In this way we can make electricity my using the gas formed by the wastes. We can store wastes in a vacuum place and produce burning gas and electricity or we can make bio fuel by directly heating the wastes. Biomass can meet needs regarding our electricity, burning gas and fuel for vehicles. One problem can occur that sometimes it may result toxic pollution if the wastes are directly from the municipal. These are the various kinds of renewable energy sources that we can use by not depending the natural resources.

Opinion

I have taken various kinds of renewable energy sources from the article. In this article I got all the renewable sources that exists now. If we can make a combination of all of the renewable energies we can make a pollution free world and can get all of our basic needs. In this article all of these renewable energy sources are being used in USA. It is described in a very good way that how much electricity USA can get from these sources. There are some limitations in the renewable sources. Limitations will be everywhere and we have to come up with solutions. It is far better to come up with a solution that can make the renewable sources perfect rather than using our natural resources to the end. Technology is developing and we hope in the very near future we can meet all our needs by only depending on the renewable sources.

Ref: http://www.nationalatlas.gov/articles/people/a_energy.html

इब्राहीम

IBRAHIM'S SUMMARY AND VIEW
Article: Dubai Hit Hard by Global Crisis
By: Phillip Barea in 14/11/2009
Summary:
Global financial crisis has a negative effects on property boom in Dubai. The absence of home buyers led to reduced expenditure of giant companies. Also, layoffs. Restructure of staff and delay some growth plans are used as a way for finance current project (Barea. P. 14/11/ 2009)

Dubai's stock market has dropped into lowest level since its launched in 2004. The decrease was especially in companies which have project will take long time to finish. The reluctance of lenders for financing speculators in property companies has caused more fallen in stock market. Even though. Financing demand has been risen by citizens, lenders have set up new regulation for credit to reduce the problem of cash (Davies. P as cited by Barea. P. 14/11/2009)

Dubai crisis has created several problem in different aspect। NBD. The largest bank in UAE, has ceased landing to foreign workers. Might that they will lose their duty or face staff restructure. Firing staff is caused civil problem. Dubai has to deport foreign workers who lose their job to avoid some civil protest.

There are a high opportunity to maintain property in Dubai. Abu Dhabi is anticipate help Dubai to overtake this crisis. Central bank in UAE has argued plan to prevent continues meltdown in Dubai, property companies and banks in UAE. Also, they are arrange liquidity as well for this plan.

References:
http://emerging-business-markets.suite101.com/article.cfm/dubai_hard_hit_by_global_crisi
View:
From this article, it can be say, that there is no doubt that Dubai will face several problem as a result of credit crisis. Firstly, unwilling of finance providers will led to reduce profitable aspect. Secondly, fragility economy has created confident crisis in investors. Thirdly, job insecurity cause increase wage rate which will led to inflation. Forth, even if Dubai exceeded this crisis, but still needs long time to builds trust with investors and skilled workers

Nick's summary and response

SUMMARY :
Advertising effects
Advertising has became a good way to communicate through the use of media. It is a form to get some information about the products, ideas and service by the advertiser. Advertisements have a lot of influence with consumers in order to increase more profits and consumers who want to buy your products. Advertisement is a corporation to help sellers market products. Also it is used to impact public actions and ideas. The forms and media in which the advertisements exist aims to use different ways to show them.
There are many ways to indicate about advertising such as newspapers, magazines, radio, TV and internet. In the subways or billboards along the freeway, we also can see. As the same some logos, signage and products appear in many place. So the purpose designed is to attract viewers.
As we all know advertising bring lots of things for us, but we still find some defect in advertising. So what advertising does not do? Some studies have indicated that the advertising can create needs and stimulate the marketing motivation. However we found that some advertisers use highly exaggerated ways to cheat public. Every day in the radio and TV, the advertising will occupy lots of time to show them. The research has told that most of the complaints come from these advertising.

RESPONSE

There is no doubt the advertising has bring lots of benefits for us. Advertiser uses some creative forms and ideas to show for consumers. For manufacturer ,seller and advertiser, it is absolutely great to get high profits. For our consumers, sometimes it is very convenient to get some information. In many place we may be attracted by lots of special advertising design such as some special logos. So if we are interested in them ,we may choose to know more information. In fact this effect tell us these advertisings are successful. However, some awful situations still exist. We often find that some advertisings are very boring. We don’t know how the seller and advertiser cooperate. Maybe no one will buy these products, but it still occupied lots of time to flack. At least it wastes lots of resource about media. Maybe after the purchase, people find that the function with these products are not consistent with the description in the advertising. A lot of complaints will appear. So advertising should use a reasonable way to show the products or ideas for public. Public also should use normal mind to face today’s advertising.


REF: http://encyclopedia.jrank.org/articles/pages/6414/Advertising-Effects.html
http://www.99bysj.cn/Soft/english/200902/698.html

Summary and response ----Hanna

Summary :
Most of universities in UK not only provide high standard’s certificates but also give more chances to students than before. Till now, there are more than 50,000 postgraduates studing in UK. Some of universities in UK have long history and there are still newest. They provide graduates strong degrees and give them the best links between their businesses and studies.
Another reason of students choosing UK is academic year for Masters programmes just in a year. The British government welcomed the international students to study in the UK. Currently,there are 96,845 students from the EU and 203,210 students from outside of it in 2003/2004..
Studing in UK is also a good opportunity to let students’ English language getting very well. You can acquire the latest information and learn quite experiences as well.

Response :
According to this article, I find data of international students in UK and some reason that why students choosing UK.
Recently,there are more than 300,000 international students including 50,000 postgraduates studing in UK. The reasons includes the following aspecters:high reputation of UK universities, most programmes time are shorter than other countries, good environment to practise oral English,government’s support and students can gaining amount of experiences from they studing and practical training or part-time jobs.
Sum up, studing in UK is a wisely choice.

Reference:http://www.prospects.ac.uk/cms/ShowPage/Home_page/International_students/Step_by_step_guide/Why_study_in_the_UK_/p!empkXdi

Eileen's summary and respond

Why does China since the reform since 1979, can achieve such extraordinary success.Characteristics of China's reform has been the pragmatic Deng Xiaoping's "Whether a cat is black or white, catch mice is a good cat" is a summary of it. Response to the problem of reform is based on China's conditions and capabilities, rather than any economic theory or principles. Of course, there are ideological constraints, but in building "socialism with Chinese characteristics," the overall objective, pragmatism has always been the guiding principle. With the rapid growth of agriculture, rural incomes have undergone substantial increases, which in turn has increased its agricultural commodities and non-agricultural commodities the growing demand.
From 1978, China embarked on a plan of economically liberal reforms. Deng Xiaoping's reforms included the end of the commune system, expansion of private business ownership and increased foreign investment. These all proved to be important causes of China’s economic growth. This created the huge growth rates and rise in GDP in China that continue today. This reform is also experience and learn from.

respond:
Chinese economic reform refers to the program of economic changes called "Socialism with Chinese characteristics" in the mainland of the People's Republic of China that were started in 1978 by pragmatists within the Communist Party of China led by Deng Xiaoping and are ongoing as of the early 21st century. The goal of Chinese economic reform was to generate sufficient surplus value to finance the modernization of the mainland Chinese economy. Neither the socialist command economy, favored by CPC conservatives, nor the Maoist attempt at a Great Leap Forward from socialism to communism in agriculture with the commune system had generated sufficient surplus value for these purposes. The initial challenge of economic reform was to solve the problems of motivating workers and farmers to produce a larger surplus and to eliminate economic imbalances that were common in command economies. China's open policy to promote the country's foreign direct investment and create more employment opportunities, to connect the international market, China's economy.


http://www.hbs.edu/research/pdf/08-007.pdf

http://www.jstor.org/stable/1242711?seq=3

http://books.google.co.uk/books?hl=en&lr=&id=cTvyw6tw0QgC&oi=fnd&pg=PR10&dq=An+international+comparison+of+China%27s+economic+reform+&ots=KyAwGZJYEI&sig=T_C-VBuhW3ysj6bfgi3HSmFdRew#v=onepage&q=An%20international%20comparison%20of%20China's%20economic%20reform&f

http://factsanddetails.com/china.php?itemid=79&catid=2

http://muse.jhu.edu/journals/china/v007/7.2.vu.html

http://www.ceibs.edu/ase/Documents/reform.htm

The summary and response of the article 1 - Sue

Article title: Liposuction on the rise as many women shun exercise and dieting


Liposuction is one of the cosmetic surgery which is a popular solution for overweight women who desire to lose their weight .Nowadays, the demand of liposuction has increased dramatically and replace doing exercise or dieting.

The plastic surgeon (Mc George) said that liposuction operation has not extremely difficult procedure that can absorb the certain parts of the body such as thighs and abdomen. It also has not any medical procedure and completely low risk.

Majority of women feel acceptable to liposuction operation due to the results are predictable through the new technique testing.

However, the plastic surgeon (Mc George) emphasized that they do not guarantee the liposuction can maintain the desirable weight if the people do not care their healthy diet. The coauthor (Mike Adams, "Natural Appetite Suppressants for Safe, Effective Weight Loss.") also said that the fat can remove and accumulate in some areas of body, so the best solution which adopt healthful lifestyles.

Reference:http://www.naturalnews.com/021530.html


Response:

According the article ,I can find the evidence to support against cosmetic surgery. Liposuction which can provide high technical skill to solve obesity problem.
It is also an efficient and low risk operation that can reduce the weight and renew the people confidence but it can also easy to return the original weight or the fat remove from fat accumulating parts of the body.It is a very expensive and the process of the operation is really painful.In my opinion, I think the real solution to maintain a good figure that people can do the excerise regularly and design a great healthy diet

reference:http://www.helium.com/items/73688-the-benefits-and-risks-of-liposuction

summary and reaction--Ian

summary

The developments of transport and communication have made the world more interdependent than ever. Advances in communication and transportation technology, combined with free-market ideology, have given goods, services, and capital unprecedented mobility. With international trade, financial transfers, and foreign direct investment, the economy is increasingly internationally interconnected. This page analyzes economic globalization, and examines how it might be resisted or regulated in order to promote sustainable development. The impact of globalization has been fair enough on the developing economies to a certain extent. It brought along with it varied opportunities for the developing countries. It gave a fillip for better access to the developed markets. The technology transfer promised better productivity and thus improved standard of living. Globalization has thrown open varied challenges such as inequality across and within different nations, volatility in financial market spurt open and there were worsening in the environmental situation.

Reference：http://www.globalpolicy.org/globalization.html
http://www.globalpolicy.org/globalization/defining-globalization.html
http://www.globalpolicy.org/globalization/globalization-of-the-economy-2-1/general-analysis-on-globalization-of-the-economy.html
http://business.mapsofindia.com/globalization/benefits.html

reaction

Globalization is a powerful real aspect of the new world system, and it represents one of the most influential forces in determining the future course of the planet. Foreign investment has both positive and negative effects. Secondly foreign investment has led to growing competition on a global basis. Finally, there is no doubt that in the process of economic globalization, the developing countries have contacted the world's advanced technologies and management methods, but this is obtained at the high price of their cheap labor and natural resources.

The summary and opinion of the article--Eddie

Internet job hunting: A field study of applicant experience with on-line recruiting
Summary:
This essay describe e-recruiting to have a big influence on jobseekers and companies. The majority of companies utilise the e-recruiting to replace traditional recruitment. It is clear that by using e-recruiting, companies can save recruitment expense. In the past, companies always draw up a budget to publish advertisement but it is not efficient to hire employees. Moreover, employment traditional advertising revenues have dropped out but the Internet advertising has been increased.
Even though the majority of companies adopt e-recruiting to find new employees, this recruitment method has some problem. For instance, Internet Fluency, type of job desired/scope of job search, technology problems and network problems in Web searches, web content and recruiting practices.
The writers design a questionnaire to send graduate business school alumni of a large university in the Southeast in USA also collect these data to analyse problems and provide good solution ways. Finally, the writers mention that without questions, using e-recruiting has immense potential benefits for companies. This recruitment method has become HR department critical management task.

Opinion
In this essay, let me know about e-recruiting is a trend in companies. Most companies have given up using traditional recruitment method because e-recruiting can save companies money to public advertisement. In fact, e-recruiting develops rapidly in recent years. Yet, there are too many e-recruiting drawbacks which give rise to jobseekers worry about whether they can find suitable job or not and the security of personal information. It is apparent that e-recruiting need some time to improve this recruitment method. Perhaps, companies need cooperate to hire a specialist who operates this website. The specialist can solve jobseekers problems, for instance, job description and set up the same resume form which reduces jobseekers to fill in resume time.

Reference:
Daniel C. Feldman and Brian S. Klaas ,HUMAN RESOURCE MANAGEMENT, Summer 2002, Internet Job hunting: A field study of applicant experience with on-line recruiting,P1-18.
http://pdc.csusb.edu/Schreihans/4_Internet_Job_Hunting.pdf

Summary and feedback-Annie Jiang

The article " graduates need work experience"


Summary

Today, students have to get work experience to increase their chances to get jobs in the downturn, and they must get skills and fist-hand experience of work at university. In 2009, 581 recruiters surveyed for the report, 78% rated employability skills in UK.
Students should learn more employability skills. The universities provide and offer students work placements during their studies to incorporate employability into courses. so that enhance their employability skills. And the companies provide the training open to students studing all subjects. eg, the exeter university students are given an employability matters handbook every year and across the campus.
During the many years, the competition will be the most intense for jobs. As the employers, they don't want to provide the fully trained to fresh graduates, but what they do value in graduates are their people skills. On the othe side, the universities and the companies should do more to meet demand among students for doing work placements and internships during a degeree.

To the UK's growth path out of recession, skills and attributes that will help young graduates get jobs and manage their careers over a lifetime.
reference

www.bbcnews.com/education/graduatesneedworkexperience.htm "graduates need work experience" 26 March 2009

Feedback

In this article, I get some useful information. Nowadays, the competition will be the most intense to get jobs. The graduates want to get job in the downturn, they have to get skills and work experience first.
The experience is what the majority of employeers want. Thus the companies don't want to provide fully trained to the fresh graduates. And education does not prepare for a real world challenges. the good mark cannot make people living better and ensure will have a succeed career. therefore, many univerisities provide and offer students the placements during their studies and help them to enhance the employability skills into courses.

kelvin-- feedback of the article

I think this article is useful for my essay, which entitled “ being ethical is the golden way of doing business in the future”. First of all, this article is talk about SRI, which stands for socially responsible investing. From this article, I got some useful information for my essay.
First of all, I know that if the company operates ethically, it will carry less risk and have higher profit. More important, it was proved by the research. Seeing that, the investors are more willing to invest their money in the company with good social responsibility.
Secondly, SRI is an investment strategy that helping the investor to choose the best company to invest. Nowadays, the investors not only consider the balance sheet and assets, but only the contribution to the society. It is because they believe that good social responsibility can help the company to gain a better financial performance.
Thirdly, not only the public and government are concerning the ethical, but also the shareholder. They will use their power and right to request the company to put more attention and resources on the community.
Finally, this article really help me a lots to backup my viewpoint on my essay. Form my point view; it is essential that company should contribute to the society such as donation and provide more job opportunity. Furthermore, company need to concern the impact on the society rather than only focus on the profit. All these actions will bring benefit to the company and make it success.

article:
http://www.principledprofit.com/socially-responsible-investing.shtml

kelvin--summary of the article

The summary of the article “ Socially Responsible Investing for Long Term” by Christopher Nolty, Senior Investment Consultant

Nowadays, many capitalists think that company integrity is crucial. Moreover, the company will have less risk (55%) and higher returns (52%) (Yankelovich study, Jan 06)if it is good at social responsibility. At the same time, company with good social image may attract more investor.
Based on this reason, SRI, socially responsible investing, is a way to help the capitalist to choose the company, which has good management and does responsible for the all the stakeholders.
Around 100 years old ago, SRI was related to religious that not encourage the business involved in gambling and alcohol and so on. Now, SRI puts more criteria onto the financial analysis such as the right of the worker and safety product. In fact, SRI focuses on social and environment instead of the account and value of the tangible assets. By adding the new element on the analysis, investors can find the company has low risk and good management system thus having a good future of financial performance. Moreover, investor plays an active role on affecting the decision of the company. Calvert, the biggest family of Sri funds, is a good example that requests the company to do specific actions including developing new environment policy.
Finally, providing housing and community development are the ways to build up the goodwill of the company. Therefore, more and more Americans try to balance the financial objective and the social obligation in order to have a better future.

Reference:
1. Attitudes Toward Socially Responsible Investing,Ó Yankelovich Study, January 2006.
2.Ibid.
3. 2005 Report on Socially Responsible Investing Trends in the US. The Social Investment Forum, 2005, p. iv.

article:
http://www.principledprofit.com/socially-responsible-investing.shtml

yingbo's summary and respond

Exploring Motivations for Participation in a Consumer Boycott
Summary
Consumer boycotts are defined as “one or more parties achieve objectives by preventing consumers from buying one kind of products in the market.” This paper reports a study of factors affecting an individual motivation to participate in a boycott because little attention was paid on this study.
Reduction in the sale of boycotted product shows the successful boycott. Consumer participation is necessary for boycott effectiveness. Why do consumers want to participate in boycott? In this study, self-enhancement and need for consistency are possible explanations for participating boycott by theories of the self. Consumer behavior is motivated by the maintenance or enhancement of self-esteem. These theories and examples illustrated this point. What are main purposes for boycotts? Three main purposes for boycotts: instrumental and expressive, clean hands motivate consumers. Expressive boycotts mean that consumers boycott products because of their displeasure. “Clean hands”: consumers boycott for feeling good about themselves instead of feeling guilty. An instrumental boycott means that goal to change a disputed policy was forced to achieve by boycotting. Theories and examples and equation are used to examine whether three main purposes affect the motive in consumers’ behavior.


Respond:
With western culture entering into our country, imported products also are occupying the market. Imported products are good, but why do domestic people want to boycott?
Esteem plays an important role in the activity. The study says: consumer behaviors are influenced by esteem maintenance or enhancement. On website in China, it is common to see words that call on boycotting products imported from some countries and supermarket. They boycott fast food, Carrefour, and Japanese products and so on because of diplomatic reasons and so on. In earlier time, Carrefour considered Taiwan as a country so that it is boycotted.
The article says that consumer anger was unrelated to consumers’ judgments of product quality. Take Japan for example. Some people think they shouldn’t buy Japanese products because Japanese occupied our countries at old time. Products represent countries’ culture. In some people’s view, Japanese products represent Japanese culture and advanced technology. If Japanese products are occupying the market, it means that Japanese culture occupy the people’s mind. It is very easily remind people of this country and its culture occupying our country at war time. If Japanese culture occupies this market again, their esteem will lose. For old people and some patriotic people, it is not endurable. But everyone could acknowledge the high quality of Japanese products. These examples show that esteem occupies the important status on customer’s behavior.
But, not all people boycott imported products. When some people boycott imported products, another people buy imported products. For them, high-quality and new design for imported products are attractive. It doesn’t mean that they do not want to have esteem. It means that they might be don’t like to communicate their angers with the actions. It means that domestic products should improve their quality and design.

Ted's Essay introduction

Topic: Chinese could become a new world language.

The Chinese is the most widely used language, in the world about a quarter of the people speak Chinese, and about 40 million are learning Chinese. Now China is the third biggest economic entity in the world, and China is called “the world factory”. So with Chinese economic and cultural exchanges across the world is increasing, the Chinese is becoming more and more important now. More and more overseas Chinese is another power to promote it developing in the world. But compare with other world language such as English and French, Chinese is not used in many countries, and learning Chinese is very difficult even though now people know 2-3 foreign language is very common. So maybe in future we Chinese should change something by it-self to suit other country people’s habit. Only by doing so, the Chinese could become a new world language.

Kamran's Essay Introduction

Online Social Networking:

Another Miracle of Internet Technology

We are moving towards a world, in which computing technology is omnipresent and our life seems incomplete without it. One of the revolutionary technologies that have been with us for two decades is Internet technology. Since Internet technology supports several ways of communication, it remained to be a very useful tool/way of information exchange throughout the world. As one of its consequence, Internet has now become a tool for the social aspect of our lives and we are moving towards a virtual connected world during this decade. It can be realised in form of online social networking sites. Currently, there are more than hundreds of online social networking websites. People can socialize using theses websites through online communities as well as instant messaging.

In this essay, I’ll examine how online social networking is affecting our daily lives? Is it a healthy and best way of socializing between people? or is it taking us towards a physically disconnected world, where people are facing a new set of problems and issues, such as physical isolation, loneliness and identity theft, etc.

Nick’s essay Introduction

Topic : The benefits and drawbacks of advertisements

With the rapid development of society, advertisements are playing an increasing significant role in people’s everyday lives. As we all know, advertisements is a good way to do business for manufacturer. However ,some bad influence bring to consumers as the same time. The manufactures always use some gaps in the market to cheat publics. In fact, we need some restrictions to balance them. In my essay, I will talk about what is advertisements, and what it brings. Of course, the important thing is that how to indentify some false or deceptive behaviors, and how to deal with them. Some limits and laws are absolutely necessary ,but improving people’s awareness is also important.

Introduction --Hanna

Topic: Studing aboard is good for students.Discuss

Introduction:Before ten years ago or even earlier,studying aboard was very rare, students who went aboard to study must have standout performance or they were quite well off. With the rapid development of the modern society, we have entered an era of information explosion. In order to acquire more knowledge and absorb more experience, there are an increasing number of students choosing to further their study abroad especially some developed countries like Occident, Australia,New Zealand and so on. For example, in China ,a lot of senior high school students and undergraduates decide to continue their study in other countries which have high quality of education when they graduate. Currently, the number of international students is increasing considerably. It seems to become a kind of fashion. Studying abroad brings about many advantages. It can gain students' knowledge , widen their horizons, and meanwhile it may cultivate their independence and personalities. It also exist some negative effects but most of these negative problems can be tackled . So I approve of students going aboard to study and this essay will the more detailed explanation.

Lucas’s essay introduction:

The advantage and disadvantage of family business

What is Family Business? As we know, family business basic includes the following three distinct characteristics: Enterprise and majority stake are controlled by family; corporate decision-making power on major issues are controlled by family; Enterprise all the important positions held by family members. We have defined the enterprise against this background as a family business. According to authoritative statistics, the average life expectancy of American’s family business is about 40 years; the average life expectancy of China’s family business is less than five years. Every entrepreneur wants their companies to sustainable development and hope that their businesses to bigger, longer, and stronger. In the USA, there is 40% family business closed in first year and 60% family business closed in second year. So do you think the family business is good? In this essay, I will argue the advantage and disadvantage of family business. The whole essay has three parts and five paragraphs.

Jackie's essay Introduction

Topic:Outer Space or Basic life?
In the last hundred years,outer space exploration has bocome more and more popular and important,many countries have sent satelites into the outer space and moving around the earth,they also send spaceships and build up space station floating in the space which do research and collect information of the univers.It's a remarkable development of humen technology，however，nowadays all over the world,there are millions and millions people are homeless,starve without a basic life quarlity,more and more people can't help thinking that is it really a right choice to spend such a huge amount of money in the outerspace?In my essay , I'll talk about this problem,I'll show you the advantage , drawback and difficulty of exploring outer space ;the American's Lie about"Did American Astronauts Really Reach the Moon" ; the necessity of basic life's needs ; the importance of the money which spent in basic needs.I tend to agree that everyone should get a happy and saticify life,rather than focusing on the outer space far away from public.

Renie - essay introduction

Topic: Telecommuting makes work better

Taking your favorite work to home is just the thing that daily commuters hope for, the flexibility in working place, time and schedule that telecommuting provides enable them no need to follow nine-to-five routine, and make their work more enjoyable.

The technology in early 1970s brought telecommuting into being; satellite and computer were connected by using telephone lines as dumb terminals (a terminal with no independent processing ability of its own which can only carry out operations when connected to a computer ICIBA interperation). By the early 1980s, the sub offices and workers could use personal computer access to company mainframe which enabled people work from home.

With the proliferation of internet, the number of people who telecommute increase steadily, and it gradually become a trend, it’s estimated that about 11billion workers working from home in USA by the year of 2009, but in the meantime, this progress also attended by many questions, one of which is whether the advantages that telecommuting brings to company and staff exceed its disadvantages has sparked much debate. In this essay, firstly, I will analysis its strength and weakness, and then make comparison on two sides. In my view, it can bring numerous benefits for both.

Shantanu: Introduction

Future of the renewable energy

Our living planet “Earth” is full of resources and we are using these natural resources as our main energy source like fossil fuel, natural gas etc. But we all know that, one day these energy sources will be finished because these are not unlimited and we are finishing up these resources a lot faster than it’s producing rate. Moreover the way of using of these natural resources are not environment friendly. It is very harmful for the balance of the eco system. So we have to think about some alternate sources of energy. We have already sorted out an alternative and that is renewable energy. There are many kind of renewable energies that we can rely on. The most popular and viable one is the solar energy. Solar is a kind of plate by which we can convert sun light to electricity. Another kind is wind power. We can generate electricity by using the wind power. This setup is called windmill. And to find alternate of natural gas we can make biogas by using cow dung and some other more wastes. These all alternatives are very environment friendly. But now the question is how much viable and cost effective these processes are? In this essay I am going to talk about the viability of rural energy in the world, about the future of the renewable energy. Many questions can be raised about the viability of these renewable energies as hybrid power system, nuclear power system has already been introduced. Moreover technologically these alternate power generation systems have to improve a lot. I will be comparing both pros and cons in these issues in different paragraphs and will make a clear statement in the end of the essay answering why renewable energies are viable.

Introduction-Sue

Essay Topic : Have you ever considered having plastic surgery?

Introduction
Plastic surgery refers to concern with reducing scarring or disfigurement that may occur as a result of accidents, birth defects or treatment for disease. Many plastic surgeons also perform cosmetic surgery that is unrelated to medical conditions. Actually, cosmetic surgery is not the same as plastic surgery which is carried out by a choice and under taken for the purpose of improving a person’s physical appearance. Nowadays, the state and quality measures of beauty has a higher requirement in modern society. Only women go for surgery in the past. However, it is become more and more women and men interest in it who desire to meet social standard of perfection. Although plastic surgery can improve the way to look better, it also bring some negative effects of the body. I strongly disagree through the surgery to change nature appearance and it may destroy health but it is a great treatment to redeem the injured people confidence. This essay will look at some of the argument for and against plastic surgery.

introduction--Eileen

From time to time various definitions of economics have been proposed . A number of them have found some measure of acceptance among economists , but it canot be said that anyone of them has been generally adopted. In view of the many controversies which have been waged concerning the scope and method of this branch of leaning. Yet the fact that there are different schools of economic thought need not constitute an insuperable bar to agreement upon definition if the latter is broad enough. The early success of chinese economic reform were important in conving soviet economists that reform was not only desirable , but also feasible.during the annus mirabilis of 1989, china suddenly lost its position as a pioneer of socialist reform. Yet it soon became clear that china , economic reform process had not been halted by the post-Tiananmen hardline leadship. Growth during the 1980s was higher than in the preceding decades but fragile.Russia is certainly not a developing country , but like as China, it also attempted a Soviet type of command economy to build a market economy, while the It is in this transition process experience will allow us to better understand China's achievements.(190)
title: An international comparison of China's economic reform during the Nineteen Nineties

Introduction

A Definition of Economy and other key terms
B An introduction of China's economy twenty years ago, the introduction of China's economy
C Western economists views on the history of China's economy
D An introduction of the economic situation in India and Russia in 1980-1990s

http://www.jstor.org/stable/1824178?seq=1
http://books.google.co.uk/books?hl=en&lr=&id=cTvyw6tw0QgC&oi=fnd&pg=PR10&dq=An+introduction+of+China%27s+economy+80S&ots=KyAwAWJRFJ&sig=26xb2g5VIpzxDjhdXEVeNL1NNME#v=onepage&q=&f
http://publishing.eur.nl/ir/repub/asset/51/erimrs20001026121755.pdf
http://www.jstor.org/stable/1344459?seq=2
http://ner.sagepub.com/cgi/content/abstract/141/1/48

The introduction of essay--Missy

Today,with the economy and technology develops at a dazzling speed,some species of wild animals have become extinct as a result of serious pollution,destruction of natural habitats and poaching.Some people think at the age of modern tcchnoloies,the existence of wild animals do not have any effect on social development.Thus,preventing them from dying out is a waste of resource.I totally disagree with this claim.The fact is that social development lead to our living enviroment at the same time is getting more polluted.One effect of this phenomenon is that there are no enough space for wild animals to survive.I will explain this issue and give some example to support my opinion.

The introduction of essay---- Eddie

Topic: Should e-recruitment replace traditional recruitment?

The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase the internet use in the world, so at the present time it is the internet which has a big influence on people’s lives. It can be found that traditional methods have gradually been replaced by the internet. For instance, people use the internet chat programmes such as MSN Messenger to communicate with their parents or friends who live in different regions. Due to technological progress, companies also adopt the latest way to recruit employees. In this decade e-recruitment has grown rapidly in the marketplace, using the internet channels communicate the potential job seekers alongside traditional method. The definition e-recruitment is “the act of scouring the internet to locate both actively-searching job seekers and also individuals who are content in their current position.” A minority of people insist that companies should use traditional method to recruit personnel which is better than e-recruitment. However, from the long-range conception of e-recruitment is going to replace tradition recruitment method. This essay will describe the development of this recruitment method in recent years. It will then examine the advantage of e-recruitment. After this, it will examine the drawback of e-recruitment. Finally, there will be an analysis of the new recruitment method.

इब्राहीम इससे

IBRAHIM'S INTRODUCTION
Crisis of Dubai
The geographic location of Dubai among the oil-rich countries in the Gulf with a shortage of economic resources in Dubai. The need for a financial and trade center to serves area was encouraged Dubai to be this center as attempt to improves its economic resource by pick up this opportunity. Dubai government has established several companies, which are owned for government but are not guaranteed by government, to accelerate reaching its ambitious.
As a result of these companies that owned by government, they have been able to borrowing a massive amount of credit to launch their new project in infrastructure and construction to become a appropriation place for attract investors and tourists. Largest company in this field is "DUBAI WORLD" which owned several artificial islands, tallest tower in the world which has been opened early in 2010 and number of project around the world has announced later 2009 to its lenders for delay their payments into the next six months.
There are number of people consider that the collapse of Dubai is inevitable. This essay will argue for the ability of Dubai to overtaking this case by focusing on what is Dubai World? And reasons and implication of this crisis. At the end will give view about how Dubai might avoid the bankrupt.
References:
http://knowledge.wharton.upenn.edu/article.cfm?articleid=2399
http://emerging-business-markets.suite101.com/article.cfm/dubai_hard_hit_by_global_crisis
IBRAHIM'S INTRODUCTION

Ian's introduction

Nowadays, in the supermarket where we can see the products from different countries, on the road we can see the cars are running which made in the different countries, and the parts of these cars are produced by different countries. For example BMW car tires from the French; the window glasses from China, steels from the United States, the world economy is increasingly becoming closely linked to a whole. Simply put, that means economic globalization. Economic globalization is an important characteristic of the contemporary world economy, is one of the important trends in world economic development. Into the 21st century, economic globalization has not only promoted the development of world trade, but also brings many uncertainties to national economies. In China, there are many factories which are built by developed countries, because China has cheap labor, abundant natural resources. These factories bring jobs to the local people also brought pollution and crisis for local companies. And that the benefits investors got is far more than the locals got. Is difficult to say that economic globalization is a bad or good for developing countries. Everything has two sides, especially in the economic globalization, in the following article, I will detail my view.

yingbo's introduction

With imported products occupying the market, it is common to see that most people would rather buy them than domestic products. Some people held a movement on website to call on people shouldn’t buy imported products for protecting domestic products and increasing the reputation of domestic products. They think government should boycott imported products. However, another people don’t agree with them. They think if imported products are boycotted, they have no idea about anything fashionable from foreign countries. Whether it is right to boycott imported products for protecting domestic products become a topic to everyone. Let’s look at what people fighting against imported products think. Those who want to boycott imported products think if everyone chooses imported products, there will be less manufacturers starting up in the future. Finally, less domestic products are seen in market. Government will rely on imported products by sustaining market. Traditional skills will be lost in the generation. So they only hope people to boycott imported products for protecting domestic products on website. Their worries sometimes are right. However, the way to protect domestic products is wrong.
We should ask ourselves: why do people want to buy imported products? We can hear what people being against boycotting imported products think. There are some reasons for their choosing imported products. 1. Some imported products, which mean products made from foreign countries, are high-quality and fashionable, comparing with domestic products. They would rather buy high-quality products for spending more money. However, domestic products are low-quality because most manufacturers in domestic land have no high-technology. Some of them use unhealthy sources to produce products for saving cost. 2. When imported products entering into the market, consumers feel fresh. 3. Some consumers think everything imported from foreign country is very good, partly because they lose confidence of domestic products. Imported products represent fashion. They think if imported products are boycotted, they will never see most fashionable things from abroad. From these points, it is not difficult to see that most consumers think domestic products are low-quality. They don’t want to buy. The way to boycott imported products but not improve technology and ethical position will be hateful to consumers. How to protect domestic products?
Firstly, technology and design must be improved to cater for the need of consumers. Secondly, domestic companies should learn new technologies from multinational companies. Thirdly, domestic companies should raise their ethical images in consumers’ mind.

The introduction of essay --August

TOPIC: Further strengthen financial supervision is not conducive to economic development

INTRODUCTION:
Lehman's collapse led to the United states subprime mortgage crisis,then caused to the global financial crisis and the world economic bogged down in the mud. United States President Barack Obama win the U.S. presidential election in this environment .His the most important task is to lead the U.S. shake off the shadow of the financial crisis and return to the track of development .Now, one year has passed, Obama delieved his annual State Of the Union address speech to report what he has done over the past year.And i really focus on and interesting in this speech.This speech continued to concentrated on economic and employment issues.And a part of his speech is talk about financial supervision.He said he will further strengthen financial superision and to prevent the financial crisis and the financial crisis infection.But ,i challenge that economic measure and query its rationality.I think that measure against the economic laws and impeded economic development .So, my essay will focus on discuss the adverse effects of strengthen financial supervision and the benefits of accordance with economic laws

The introduction of essay-Annie Jiang

Topic: will good education or work experience more important and get ahead faster in people's career?
Introduction
The global economic crisis has brought uncertainly to the labour makets around the world, the depression has a nagetive influence to people's career. Always prepare a rainy day, many people worried about their current job and career prospects. Someone made great efforts on their current job, someone went back school again. As we all know, finding a good job is more difficult than it was just a year ago. People should think of ways to acquire rich work experience or a good education certificate through they can distinguish themselves from others in the job markets or even career growth. I would agree that work experience is more important and get ahead faster in people's career. This essay will focus on disscuss and analysis how and why the work experience is more important. But also I will give some example to support my opinions.

The introduction of Kelvin's essay

Topic: Being ethical is the golden way of doing business in the future.
Passively? Actively?

Introduction:
One day, I did shopping with my friend in a fashion shop. Suddenly, she told me with an angry voice “ hey Kelvin, I won’t buy anything which is made by leather!” Actually, I understood the reason behind but one question came to my mind and the question is that is it a must for the company to run the business ethically nowadays? As we all know, ethical issue draws more and more attention from the public, government and even within the Industry than a decade before. As far as I can see being ethical is no more optional for the company. Apparently, government is doing something to control the company by implementing new regulation, which related to environment, employee and product safety. At the same time, company puts more effort on improving their image and getting confidence from the consumer. They will contribute to the society and benefit their employees. I reckon that if the companies want to survive in keen competition market, they should be ethical both “passively” and “actively”.

Renie's essay plan

Some people think company and staff can benefit a lot from telecommuting, while others disagree, what’s your opinion?

Topic: Telecommuting makes work better

Introduction Para 1

1. Background

-how and when it came into being?

-reasons (the proliferation of internet, people want to find work-life balance，etc)

-some figures to show how many people telecommute in big counties

2. Structure

-analysis the advantages, drawbacks for companies and staff

3. Thesis

-Telecommuting can bring numerous benefits for both company and staff.

Body Para 2 People in favor of telecommuting think the advantages are considerable

for company

-boost employee morale and enhance productivity.

-improve company culture (human-based management) and labor relation (staff-oriented)

-save overheads (on rent, utilities, parking space, etc)

-enable company to recite eligible people from other counties, and can increase employment rate (including female, disabled people)

Para3 for staff

-staff can strike a balance (lessen work-induced stress)

-enjoy flexible working condition and schedules

-also can save time, feet, and fare

Para4 Some people disagree, for it has drawbacks

1. for company

-how to manage telecommuters can be a problem

-easy to expose business secret

2. for staff

-communication skills decline, depression of isolating with colleagues

-lack of physical contact, and inspiration from the team work

-form slack habit

Para5 argue with opposite opinion and come up with possible solutions to above-mentioned problems, it also has potential benefits, such as ease traffic condition, etc.

Conclusion Para6: advantages overweight its drawbacks; there an increasing number of companies allow their staff working at home, telecommuting will become a trend of working.

Reference: Nilles, Jack M., Managing Telework: Options for Managing the Virtual Workforce, John Wiley & Sons 1998, ISBN 0-471-29316-4

Leonhard, Woody, The Underground Guide to Telecommuting, Addison-Wesley 1995, ISBN 0-201-48343-2

Online Social Networking – Cheap As Chips?

PARAGRAPH ONE

Statement of the Essay

Introduction

Background

PARAGRAPH TWO

For/Support = Discuss

For/Support = Discuss (Maybe split in two Para)

PARAGRAPH THREE

Against/Support = Discuss

Against/Support = Discuss (Maybe split in two Para)

PARAGRAPH FOUR

Discussion

Critical Analysis

Personal Opinion

Conclusion

References: (Till Yet- Still working)

Children & Society, Volume 24 Issue 1, Pages 75- 83, Published online: 4 June 2009

On the Rapid Rise of Social Networking Sites: New Findings and Policy Implications

Sonia Livingstone* and David R Brake

Department of Media and Communications, London School of Economics and Political Science,

London, UK

Young People and Social Networking Services: A Childnet International Research Report

http://www.digizen.org/downloads/fullReport.pdf

August' Essay Plan

TITLE: Further strengthen financial supervision is not conducive to economic development

ESSAY ABSTRACT AND KEY WORDS:
1 Obama' state of the union address speech
2 bank resure
3 law of the economy
4 financial supervision
5 against the law of economy
6........

PREAMBLE:
Obama said he will to limit the big banks on the business and to present them involves in investment business in his speech .Some business and political leaders think that Obama' consistent with this formulation is not practical and would limit the law of the economy itself.

MAIN TEXT:
1 Paragraph :Obama in the state of the union stressed that the united states should continue to strengthen financial supervision and implementation of "a serious financial reform" ,to present the crisis happen again,however, the global financial crisis is not just caused of the adverse financial regulation,on the contray,excessive financial regulation is not conducive to economy laws and impede economic development

2 Paragraph:(my point of view) should not strengthen financial supervision , it against the law of the economy.

3 Paragraph: example(reference)

4paragraph: example(reference)



CONCLUSION: further strengthen the U.S. financial regulation is bad for itself and world

REFERENCE: Obama' State Of The Union Address Jan 27.2010

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Jackie's essay plan

Topic:Outer Space or Basic life?
Nowadays governments spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Some people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth.Which is more important?
Plan:
Introduction:background information:government spend too much money on outer space
definition of outer space and Basic life
more and more people doult the allocation of money
Basic life is more important.
body:the principle of capital resource money allocation
advantage of exploring outer space National power,new resource.......
drawback of exploring outer space not easy to get success cost too much money......
example:CNN shows "Amecican might not get on the moon""Did American Astronauts Really Reach the Moon""the result is a cheat"

Basic life:the cost on the basic needs
millions and millions of people who are homeless,starve
the basic construction need built
problems caused by lack of basic needs
civilization of humanbeing ,a civilized country meas everyone get a happy saticify life,not on the outer space far away from public


conclusion:sum up:Basic needs is much more important

CRISIS OF DUBAI

In least November , Dubai has announced its request to the lenders 's Dubai World to postpone the payments for the next six months .
From this statement and your financial background and news reports, do think Dubai going to get collapse?

Plan :
INTRODUCTION:
History of Dubai
Location and population
Economy source
Government companies (Dubai World)
Crisis reason
Crisis effects
DUBAI WORLD :
Background
Main duty
REASON OF CRISIS :
1-Low interest rate : launch new project
2-World financial crisis : decline revenue from new project.
REPRECISSION :
1-Reluctance investors .
2-Build a strong economy.
CONCLUSION :
An opportunities for new investors
REFERENCES:
http://knowledge.wharton.upenn.edu/article.cfm?articleid=2399
http://business.timesonline.co.uk/tol/business/economics/article6960523.ece

ESSAY PLAN --NICK

Topic: The benefits and drawbacks of advertisements

Introduction:
Background: With the rapid development of society, advertisements are playing an increasing significant role in people’s everyday lives. Everywhere people go, a voice in their ears says: “Buy me.” Some people claim that advertisements have become an indispensable part of modern life. However, as the proverb goes: “No garden without weeds,” advertisements also exert some adverse effects on our lives. Many people suffer a lot from the advertisements, which fall thick and heavy, to such an extent that some of them even put forward the proposal that all advertisements should be banned. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

Body:
1. benefits
a. manufacturers cam promote their new products and enhance marketing
b. introduce a new lifestyles to us and help us to keep abreast with the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology.
c. Offer us great visual and audio enjoyment and enlightenment

2. drawbacks
a. many of the advertisements are exaggerative, misleading and false, full of flowery words and traps
b. produce a far-reaching negative influence on the healthy development of our younger generation
c. some advertisements are irritating disturbances to us
d. the cost of the advertisements is often transferred onto customers

3. against and dealwith
a. make sure that the strengths are enhanced and the weaknesses are discarded
b. the government should lay down more effective laws
c. supervision over the advertising industry
d. people should be more rational

Conclusion:
Advertisements, like anything else, have more than one face. Their advantages should never keep us from their drawbacks.