Sunday, 7 February 2010

Essay plan - Sue

Essay Topic : Have you ever considered having plastic surgery?

A) Introduction:
-The definition of plastic surgery.
-Background:
 the state or quality of being beautiful
 the comparison of the past (only women go for surgery) and present ( more and more women and men interest in)
-Why the surgery has become popular?
 many people don’t like some aspects of their appearance
 are driven by media and advertisements
 try to meet society’s standards of perfection
-It can also be an unhealthy idea
 negative effect of the body
- My point of view
 distorts the appearances nature and destroy health

B) Body:
1.) Disadvantage:
- the explanation of distorts the appearances nature
- give the evidence of a famous celebrity such as Michael Jason
2.) Disadvantage:
- the explanation of the risks
- give the evidence such as anesthesia include blood clots, temporary paralysis, abnormal heart rhythm etc.
3.) Argue against
- the explanation of the people who want to do the surgery
- the advantage of the surgery such as renew confidence
- give the evidence 1 that how can the surgery brings happiness to the congenital and injured people
- give evidence 2 that surgery has become common which especially occur in Asia such as Japan ,korea etc
.
C) conclusion
- summarize
- my opinion and suggestion


D) Reference
http://www.surgery.org/sites/default/files/2007QFacts.pdf
http://www.nhs.uk/conditions/Plastic-surgery/Pages/Introduction.aspx
http://ezinearticles.com/?Advantages-and-Disadvantages-of-Plastic-Surgery&id=1013779
http://www.livestrong.com/article/23750-disadvantages-plastic-surgery/

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