Sunday, 9 May 2010

Sue's introduction

Topic: Are women better parents than men
(1) Introduction

Being parent is hard work but can bring fulfilling and memorable experience. In fact, both genders are capable of looking after children but they have various responsibilities. Traditionally, the majority of females were housewives who were responsible to do housework, childcare only and fathers were the pillar of economics who worked outside. Unfortunately, nowadays, the single mothers and fathers have been increased in modern life .Thus, females can be more important role and independent in their families due to they have to instead of father’s role to have reliable income and take care their children simultaneously. Basically, women are good at looking after children if compare with men. This is because women have innate female aptitude who are willing to stay at home or desire to come back home immediately even they have their own careers. They are also comparative know how to distribute their time for the time between their job and families .However, most of men prefer having some entertainments to release their stressed after working rather than go home. Men may think children always make noise and annoying lead to less participate in communication with them. They may also believe that communication which is mother’s responsibility. Therefore, men may easier to neglect their children than women. This essay will focus on psychological and biological factors to discuss the argument for women may be better parent than men and the argument against men can be good parents rather than women. I will also give my opinion at the end of the conclusion.

References:
Laura Sabattini and campbell Leaper,'The relation between mothers and fathers parenting style and their division of labour in the home: young adults retrospective reports", Sex roles,vol.50,nos.3/4 February 2004

1 comment:

  1. Good.

    "women have innate female aptitude" - needs supporting!
    Don't just say you will give your opinion, give it.

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