Tuesday, 11 May 2010

Nick's essay plan

Should it reduce a penalty for juvenile crimes?

A) Introduction:

-Background: The number of juvenile crimes keeps increasing rapidly. The phenomenon becomes very serious.
-Why does it happen like that?
-Whether it should reduce a penalty for juvenile crimes.
-My thesis: it should not reduce penalty for juvenile crimes.

B) body

1. Argument for: it should still reduce penalty like before.
1) the benefits for reducing
2) give a small conclusion

2. Argument against:
1) the disadvantages for reducing
2) give a small conclusion

C) conclusion
Give the response and opinion

REF:http://socialissues.wiseto.com/Articles/FO3020630076/

1 comment:

  1. Grammar of title needs work.
    What are the advantages and disadvantages?
    What't your response and opinion?
    Is that an academic reference?

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