Thursday, 6 May 2010

Essay plan- Nero

topic: global warming
true? should we take more action?

introduction:
background: nowadays, increasing g.w. news have been reported.
one side: we should focus on it
another side: it is not true.


main body:
a:support: co2 ,temperature increased, some islands disappeared.....

b:against : sun -closer , crustal movement....

c:comparison: advant.&disadv.


conclusion:at the present time, there are many other problem,such as unemployment, environmental pollution...


reference:
www.//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/global_warming
http://www.aproundtable.org/tps30info/globalwarmup.html

1 comment:

  1. Not enough detail in plan. References not academic enough. Title needs to be clearer.

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