Sunday, 7 February 2010
Essay plan - Sue
A) Introduction:
-The definition of plastic surgery.
-Background:
the state or quality of being beautiful
the comparison of the past (only women go for surgery) and present ( more and more women and men interest in)
-Why the surgery has become popular?
many people don’t like some aspects of their appearance
are driven by media and advertisements
try to meet society’s standards of perfection
-It can also be an unhealthy idea
negative effect of the body
- My point of view
distorts the appearances nature and destroy health
B) Body:
1.) Disadvantage:
- the explanation of distorts the appearances nature
- give the evidence of a famous celebrity such as Michael Jason
2.) Disadvantage:
- the explanation of the risks
- give the evidence such as anesthesia include blood clots, temporary paralysis, abnormal heart rhythm etc.
3.) Argue against
- the explanation of the people who want to do the surgery
- the advantage of the surgery such as renew confidence
- give the evidence 1 that how can the surgery brings happiness to the congenital and injured people
- give evidence 2 that surgery has become common which especially occur in Asia such as Japan ,korea etc
.
C) conclusion
- summarize
- my opinion and suggestion
D) Reference
http://www.surgery.org/sites/default/files/2007QFacts.pdf
http://www.nhs.uk/conditions/Plastic-surgery/Pages/Introduction.aspx
http://ezinearticles.com/?Advantages-and-Disadvantages-of-Plastic-Surgery&id=1013779
http://www.livestrong.com/article/23750-disadvantages-plastic-surgery/
Essay Plan--Missy
Topic:Some people think at the age of modern techononlogies,the existence of wild animals do not have any effect on social development.What's your opinion?
Introduction
Background information:
- With the economy and technology develops at a dazzling speed,some species of wild animals have become extinct as a result of serious pollution,destruction of natural habitats and poaching.
- The main reason about reduce the number of animals.
- The impect of reducing the number of animals for humans.
- How to protect the animals?What shall we do?
Paragraphs:
For 1:The main reason about reduce the number of animals.
- Enviroment pollution
- Global climate change
- The enrty of alien species
- ......
For2:The impact of reducing the number of animals for humans.
- Food animals
- Labor animals
- Economic animals
- Laboratory animals
- Medical animals
- Pet
For3:How to protect the animals?What shall we do?
- Do not eat meat
- Do not wear fur
- Legisation
- To save endangered animals
- ......
Argument
Some people think at the age of modern technologies,the existence of wild animals do not have any effect on social development.Thus preventing from dying out is a waste of resource.I totally disagree with this claim.Because...
Conculsion
Each of animals is a part of the natural food chain.If one spices extinct,the other animals which depend on the spices living are also will extinct.Because there is no food.Thus forming a loop.Each animals has their own unique genes.After the animal extinction,Its genes also disapppeared.This left the evolution of mankind's exploration of biological suspense.Therefor we should protect animals,otherwise ,there only humans an the earth at one day in the future.How longly we will be?
Reference
Ted’s Essay Plan
Title: The Dragon rise
Subtitle: Could Chinese become a new world language?
Background: Chinese is one of five official languages in the United Nations. Now there are more than one and a half billion people speaking Chinese on the earth. As many as 40 million people now learning it as a second language. And there are 256 Confucius Institutes and 58 Confucius classrooms have been established in 81 countries.
My opinion: Support Chinese become a new world language.
Body
Part Ⅰ:
1st paragraph: Introduce the background about Chinese and Confucius Institutes.
2nd paragraph: Analysis this topic, list some culture and polity advantage to support how important Chinese is.
3rd paragraph: From Chinese economic development to support it.
Part Ⅱ:
4th paragraph: list some disadvantages to oppose it. “Chinese is the most difficult language”.
5th paragraph: list the difficulty of Chinese become world language.
Part Ⅲ:
Conclusion: Analysis all disadvantages and advantages and give my finally opinion.
Reference:
1: Lu, Dan Journal of Asian Pacific Communication, Volume 18, Number 2, 2008 , pp. 268-279(12), John Benjamins Publishing Company
2: G HU, Review of Educational Research, 2008 ,rer.sagepub.com
3:Y chen, Asian Social Science, 2009, ccsenet.org/journal.html
4: http://www.confuciusinstitute.net/
Essay Plan - Shantanu Barua
Introduction:
Background:
· Brief explanation of why we need alternative energy.
· Introduction to renewable energy.
· Short description of the steps of the whole essay.
Thesis Statement: Renewable energy is viable and we should support it.
Main Body:
Para 1:
Description of various kinds of existing renewable energies.
Later criticisms will be discussed and be defended in every paragraph.
Para 1:
Hybrid power has already been introduced.
Discuss and support the renewable energy.
Para 2:
Nuclear energy has already been introduced.
Discuss and support the renewable energy.
Para 3:
Technologically Solar power has to develop a lot.
Discuss and support the renewable energy.
Para 4 (or may be in every paragraph):
Some real examples will be shown as a proof of the viability of the renewable energy.
Conclusion:
Will be summing up the whole essay and will be supporting the bright future of the renewable energies.Lucas' essay plan
Introduction:
•What is family business?
• Background information about family business
• whether the family business is good?
-advantage →The decision-making efficiency, Potential inspire, Good cooperation, Fast initial financing
-disadvantage →Family conflicts, Family business management system conflict with modern enterprise management system, High-risk decision-making
• Conclusion
Body:
1. Advantage
a. Family business has strong adaptability
b. Family members do their best to improve the efficiency of the family business
c. The demand of inspiring is very low
d. Family business can get start-up capital easily and quickly
2. Disadvantage
a. Family conflicts will penetrate the governance of family business
b. Family business management system conflict with modern enterprise management system ,so it will restrict the development of family business
c. Business environment change fast. It is easy to lead to the decision-making mistakes in family business
3. Argument for the disadvantage?
a. We should coordinate the relationship between family members
b. Improve the family leader’s traditional opinion is also very important
c. Management System Innovation is good for family business
Conclusion:
-Summary the whole essay
Essay Plan--- Eddie
Introduction
Background- recruitment’s method transformation
The definition of e-recruitment and traditional recruitment
E-recruitment should replace traditional recruitment
Main body
The development of this recruitment method in recent years
E-recruitment advantage:
1. Companies save the advertisement fee in newspaper
2. Time-saving
3. Renewing job vacancies quickly
E-recruitment disadvantage
1. Difficult find a company’s webpage
2. Few links between general job boards and a company
3. Difficult reformat and submit resumes to diverse webpage’s specification
Argument disadvantage
1. improve the webpage system
2. make the same format
Conclusion
At the present time, most companies adopt e-recruitment to replace traditional recruitment. E-recruitment’s benefit is bigger than traditional recruitment.
Essay plan ----Eileen
Introduction
a, the definition of the economy
b, Western economists is that if look at China's economy
c, twenty years ago, the introduction of China's economy as well as some of the economic situation of some developing countries
d, mainly in India and Russia, the country's economic situation in
body:
1, the reform with Chinese characteristics
a ,and eighties of the Chinese Economy
b, Why is that China is the most characteristic changes
2, China's reform and growth
a, the beginning of reform is how to reform, as well as the institutional reform process
b, after the pre-reform and reform of the country's economic growth in the most obvious contrast to
3, over the past 20 years, India and China's reform and contrast
a,and eighties India's development level and the population
b, India is how to reform the
c, why is that China's reform is a virtuous cycle of reform in India is a vicious cycle
4, Russia's transformation and reform
a, after the reform of Russia and China's reform of the differences
b, Russia is how to transition
c, Russia after what the final outcome of the reform
Conclusion
a, all the reform of China's experience in the country is a reference
b, after the reform of China's economy better than the pre-reform economy